M Hill

The Hard Choices essay had a go outline and gave a to a greater extent interesting utterly than Initiation into Adulthood Initiation into Adulthood is a very basic essay and gave the impression that is was written by a less experienced writer. I felt the paper was boring and did non keep my tending while reading apiece briefly twaddle. The nearly noniceable mistake was that the paper did a plot summary for each story and never provided a conclusion or a sic in any of the stories. The checklist says to use present filter verbs and this story utilise well-nighly past tense.The Hard Choices essay foxs an analysis of each short story and provides direct quotes from the short stories. Initiation into Adulthood did not do a imperative analysis of the short stories. There were no literary terms used in this essay and there were no kit and caboodle cited. The writer did not list the authors names in the essay to give credit for their work. This essay was boring and did not rea lly give the looker cohesive account of what the writer was trying to convey. Hard Choices on the other(a) end was a good read It was exciting it kept my attention and made me want to continue to read more. This essay followed most of the literary rules of writing, Although, I found the plot summaries for this essay to be boring as well. I really liked reading the comparative analysis ND the writers position for each of the short stories. The writer gave us their view of why they felt each character made the decisions that were made for each story from their point of view.Unlike Initiation into Adulthood the writer for Hard Choices uses present tense verbs when writing about the short stories. The writer used the necessary resources to sustenance their view of the stories which made the writer seem reliable. The conclusion for this essay was dead on and summarizes the short stories completely and was cohesive with the rest of the essay. Am not really into literature and I dont th ink I am a very good writer. Hopefully, that will change after this semester.I think something that would even off both essays easier to read would be eliminating the plot summaries. Like novels and in most movies the reader/viewer does not want to have the plot give to them in the beginning. I think both essays would be a better read if their plots were a buildup and the reader was given the opportunity to read and contract their own conclusion.